Tuesday, August 2, 2016
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Well done Blake. You have worked hard to improve your story and as a result, it is interesting to read. I like the way that the words go well with every page. Next step - read out loud and check capitals.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad your story had a happy ending Blake. You introduced many characters along the way. Did you have a favourite character? I look forward to your next story.
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