A&P SHOW WORK

On thursday the 16th of november Rimu went to the A&P show and I met ling and zing at the A&P show the best bit was on the bubbles that went on water this is all the food that I got hot chips with tomato sauce and cotton candy and we got a big strip of liquorice and a bag of chips and jelly beans

and then we had a lollie scramble. And this is the task that we had to do there are some photos.

   

The oceanmaker.

this is how we did it we wrote a plan about what we were going to write in our stories we had a brainstorm then we wrote our stories here is my story down below.            

                                                                                                                     


Can you give me feedback please oh and here is the video for ocean maker.


The ocean maker video

One day the In the dried up ocean the was a boy he was determined to find a cloud and he almost got there but his plane run out of fuel the he crashed landed into the village next he got a new plane and he was looking for a cloud for days he was so tired that he was almost asleep then he fall asleep then he woke up by a big bang he new straight away it was the bombs again he quickly went to his bunker after a couple hours he came out he finally found a cloud he was so happy that he crashed into the rocks and died. THE END. ok this was a terrible ending but it was an ending.