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Thursday, May 26, 2016

This week, the story writers wrote a narrative story. Enjoy!

The lost boy : )


Once upon a time there was a boy called Ricky he was 13 years old and he likes to run away a lot and he lived in space and there were monster’s. He got lost and so he ran into an alien and tried to attack him.

However the alien got his foot shot of then lots of aliens came. Suddenly there was a big boom and all the aliens died. Eventually they found the spaceship and Ricky yelled “i'm back!”. Ricky says can we go back to earth, and in the end the man says “ya if you don't call me uncle”.



Once upon a time there was a boy called Ricky he was 13 years old and he likes to run away a lot and he lived in space and there were monster’s. He got lost and so he ran into an alien and tried to attack him.

However the alien got his foot shot of then lots of aliens came. Suddenly there was a big boom and all the aliens died. Eventually they found the spaceship and Ricky yelled “i'm back!”. Ricky says can we go back to earth, and in the end the man says “ya if you don't call me uncle”.

1 comment:

  1. Well Blake you have shared the story twice for good measure. How amazing that ricky could run away to space. Does he have a spaceship of his own or did he hitch a ride? Great to see you using speech marks.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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