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Monday, August 8, 2016

I am as...


I am slimy as a fish
Quick as a cheater
Small as a ant
Happy as a zombie  
Nice as a golem
Mean as a hog rider
Strong as a giant
Loud as a wave
Quiet as a mouse
Brave as a barbarian king
Wild as a dragon
Put it all together and you’ve got Blake!


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3 comments:

  1. Well done Blake. This is a great set of similes. Do you really think that Golem is nice? You have selected a wonderful range of examples.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  3. Well done Blake, My name is Kaedun from St Bernadette's School Hornby and I think that this is a great piece of Writing those similes make me think now I think I know what you look like. Can you tell me what a golem nothing needed fixing and you are very good at explaining about yourself. My favorite part was when you said put it together and you've got Blake. Hope to see more of your Posts.

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